What was the best food you ate during your vacation?
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When I went to a bali, Indonesia for my honeymoon.
I ate many foods in a bali.
Espcially mi-goreng that made slim noodle was good.
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Thank you, [이름] for doing your homework. It seems that you had a great time in Bali.
~Kelly^^
When I went to a bali, Indonesia for my honeymoon.>> When I went to Bali, Indonesia for my honeymoon.
I ate many foods in a bali.
I ate many foods in a bali.
>> I ate many foods in Bali.
Espcially mi-goreng that made slim noodle was good.
Espcially mi-goreng that made slim noodle was good.
>> Especially mi-Goreng, the slim noodle was good.
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