What was the best game you have ever played since you were a child? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I was a football player when i was student in elementary school. There was a big festival held in every year in our city. So many people took part in the event, preparing lots of foods and had it together. There are many competitions to win the football game. I could never forget it until now.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ethan!
Thank you for answering my question.
It\'s good to know that you had this kind of wonderful memory.
It\'s a memory that you can cherish forever. A memory that will remind you of a nice childhood. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
There was a big festival held in every year in our city.
>>There was a big festival held in our city every year.
So many people took part in the event, preparing lots of foods and had it together.
>> So many people took part in the event, preparing lots of food and had it together.
There are many competitions to win the football game.
>> There were many competitions to win the football game.
I could never forget it until now.
>> CORRECT.
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