What was the best gift that you received on your birthday?
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My best birthday gift is Tayo slide.
Tayo slide was have a stairs.
And we go travel to Jejudo.
We by the magnet.
These are my favorite.
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HOMEWORK:
What was the best gift that you received on your birthday?
My best birthday gift is Tayo slide.
>> The best birthday gift that I recieved is the Tayo slide.
Tayo slide was have a stairs.
>> Tayo slide has stairs.
And we go travel to Jejudo.
>> And when we travelled to Jeju island, we bought a magnet.
These are my favorite
>> CORRECT
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