What was the best gift you have ever received?
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~~May~~
The first, i feel got the happiest gift when I met my wife.
>> One greatest gift that I have ever received was when I met my wife.
The second i was feel happiness when I got a son.
>> Another great gift is when my son was born.
Third, when i met my daughter, I begining ambition for live happily.
>> And another great gift is when my daughter came out in this world. Then I began living my life happily.
Lastly, when i was in class with you,
>> Lastly, it is when I started my class with you.
I feel still had to something to do.
>> I think I still have something to do.
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