What was the best part of your week, and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
What was the best part of your week, and why?
The best part of my week was going to the spa with my son on the weekend, because we spent a relaxing time together there.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jace!
Great job! Your sentence is clear and easy to understand. You answered both parts of the question (what was the best part of your week and why), which is excellent. Just be careful with small details like using “over the weekend” instead of “on the weekend” for smoother English. You could also combine your ideas to make the sentence flow more naturally. Keep up the good work!
~~Teacher Kate
The best part of my week was going to the spa with my son on the weekend because we spent a relaxing time together there.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: The best part of my week was going to the spa with my son over the weekend because we were able to spend a relaxing time together.
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