What was the best part of your weekend?
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강사 첨삭
Hello Su ri!
Thank you for sharing the interesting story. I would be in a panic if the bag I wanted gets sold out before I could buy it! haha. Anyway, I think you did a good job with the composition. See you later in class. ^^
~~Teacher Kate
1. I bought my bag in the weekend.
>>I bought my bag on the weekend.
2. I had really wanted the blue bag a long time a go.
>>I had really wanted the blue bag for a long time.
3. But, I forgot buying that every month.
>>CORRECT!
4. The store posted the notice on SNS.
>>CORRECT!
5. The content is the blue bag will be out of stock.
>>The content of the notice was that the blue bag will be out of stock.
6. There are a few bags.
>>There were a few bags left.
7. So I ordered hurriedly the bag.
>>So, I ordered the bag in a hurry.
8. I could get a last bag!!!
>>I was able to get the last bag.
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