What was the best suggestion you have ever received from someone?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I decided to quit the company, my colleague suggested that you must go on a trip to Europe.
So I bought the air ticket and prepared the travel. I traveled for a month with my mom. It was the best suggestion.
강사 첨삭
your mother must be grateful for that experience with you, Emily! -Faith-
When I decided to quit the company, my colleague suggested that you must go on a trip to Europe.>> CORRECT
So I bought the air ticket and prepared the travel.
So I bought the air ticket and prepared the travel.
>> So, I bought the air ticket and prepared for the travel.
I traveled for a month with my mom.
>> I had traveled for a month with my mom.
It was the best suggestion.
>> CORRECT
OR That\'s why for me, it was the best suggestion.
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