What was the best thing about your childhood?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I didn\'t like my childhood because my family was big
I lived grandfather and grandmother and
my 5 siblings
My parents ran a market so I didn\'t want to be busy all the time
I helped my parents a lot
So I wanted to independent
I liked playing with my friends outside the most.
강사 첨삭
Wonderful day to you, Kay! A little progress each day adds up to big results. Always believe in yourself. I appreciate your hard work. Keep it up! I am rooting for you.
I think I didn\'t like my childhood because my family was big
>>> I think I didn\'t like my childhood because my family was big.
I lived grandfather and grandmother and
my 5 siblings
my 5 siblings
>> I lived with my grandfather, grandmother, and my 5 siblings.
My parents ran a market so I didn\'t want to be busy all the time
>>> My parents ran a market so I didn\'t want to get busy all the time.
I helped my parents a lot
>>> I helped my parents a lot.
So I wanted to independent
>>> So, I wanted to be independent.
I liked playing with my friends outside the most.
>>> I liked to play with my friends outside.
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