What was the best thing about your childhood?
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You know, when I was younger, I used to skip an academy a lot owing to get me thrilled by doing it. So while I was skipping an academy, I played to badminton with my sister because they would try to call to the telephone. By calling it, they will tell that I was absent during a class. So that\'s why I hang out with her. :)
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Happy Friday, Elic! May your day and weekend be filled with kind people, wonderful thoughts and happy memories. I wish you a lovely day ahead.
So while I was skipping an academy, I played to badminton with my sister because they would try to call to the telephone.
You know, when I was younger, I used to skip an academy a lot owing to get me thrilled by doing it.
>>> You know, when I was younger, I used to skip my academy classes a lot owing to get me thrilled by doing it.
So while I was skipping an academy, I played to badminton with my sister because they would try to call to the telephone.
>>> So while I was skipping an academy, I played badminton with my sister because they would try to call the telephone.
By calling it, they will tell that I was absent during a class.
>>> By calling it, they will know that I was absent during a class.
So that\'s why I hang out with her.
>>> CORRECT.
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