What was the best vacation you ever had? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is most memorable that I went on a honeymoon to Thailand two years ago.
It was because it was my first trip to foreign countries.
I was so happy and I didn\'t want to wake up from that dream. hahaha
After 20 years, I want to go there again on my wedding anniversary trip.
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>>It was most memorable when I went on a honeymoon in Thailand two years ago.
OR>>The most memorable vacation was when I went on a honeymoon in Thailand two years ago.
It was because it was my first trip to foreign countries.
>>It was because it was my first trip in a foreign country.
I was so happy and I didn\'t want to wake up from that dream. hahaha
>>CORRECT
After 20 years, I want to go there again on my wedding anniversary trip.
>>CORRECT
OR>>After 20 years, I want to go there again for my wedding anniversary trip.
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