What was the biggest challenge you\'ve faced this year?

2022-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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The biggest challenge that I\'ve faced applied for the company in [이름]gapore. I\'ve never done it before, It was the first time. Even though I can\'t speak English well, I tired it. If I got a document passed, I will have to prepare the self-introduction in English. It will be hard, so my heart is half and half.

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Hi Elic!  

You have to believe in yourself. You can do everything if you have confidence. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

The biggest challenge that I\'ve faced applied for the company in [이름]gapore. 
>> The biggest challenge that I\'ve faced is when I applied for a company in [이름]gapore. 

I\'ve never done it before, It was the first time.
>>I\'ve never done it before. It was my first time.

Even though I can\'t speak English well, I tired it. 
>> Even though I can\'t speak English well, I tried it. 

If I got a document passed, I will have to prepare the self-introduction in English. 
>> If I pass document, I have to prepare for a self-introduction in English. 

It will be hard, so my heart is half and half.
>> CORRECT

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