what was the biggest train accident that happened in your country?
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The biggest train accident in my country happened in Busan which is one of big cities in March, 1993. The train cames off the railway because of roadbed settlement. 78 people were killed and 198 were injured in this accident. It has recorded biggest train accident in Korea.
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This must be devastating, Elena! I feel sorry for the victims and their families. I hope and pray that there will be no more accidents as this in the future.-Faith-
The biggest train accident in my country happened in Busan which is one of big cities in March, 1993. >> The biggest train accident in my country happened in Busan, one of the big cities in Korea, in March 1993.
The train cames off the railway because of roadbed settlement.
>> The train came off the railway because of roadbed settlement.
78 people were killed and 198 were injured in this accident.
>> Seventy-eight people were killed and 198 were injured in this accident.
It has recorded biggest train accident in Korea.
>> It has been recorded as the biggest train accident in Korea.
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