What was the difference between this year\'s Chu Seok and last year?
학생이 쓴 원문
In last year\'s Chu Seok my family and relatives met together and ate and talked a lot. However, this Chu Seok only my family had a time together. I think keep eating and talking is same to last one.
강사 첨삭
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Here are your corrections:
In last year\'s Chu Seok my family and relatives met together and ate and talked a lot.
>> In last year\'s Chu Seok, my family and relatives got together. We ate and talked a lot.
However, this Chu Seok only my family had a time together.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> However, this Chu Seok, only my family had a time together.
I think keep eating and talking is same to last one.
>> I think we did the same as last year, eat and talk.
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