What was the first thing you bought after you got your very first salary?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I received first salary, my feel was very happy.
and I bought gift for my parents.
In korea traditional, when receive first salary, alomost buy red warm cloth.
It is mean red warm cloth bring happiness
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>>When I received my first salary, I felt very happy.
and I bought gift for my parents.
>>And I bought gifts for my parents.
In korea traditional, when receive first salary, alomost buy red warm cloth.
>>For Korean\'s tradition, when we receive our first salary, we buy a red warm cloth.
It is mean red warm cloth bring happiness
>>Red warm cloth brings happiness.
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