What was the first thing you did when you heard about the spread of the Coronavirus?

2020-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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What was the first thing you did when you heard about the spread of the Coronavirus? As I told you, I working for pharmaceutical company where is most place to infection from the patient . So I stop to go hospital and community health center. and more like to wash and clean. In additional question for you about 11th edition for my article. is the same meaning for each sentence?  \"For exemple, I prefer to buy groceries outside than do online shopping. >> \"For example, I prefer purchasing groceries online than doing them in person. I means that I prefer Purchasing groceries them in person than online.

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Hello [이름]. Thank you for doing your homework diligently. I appreciate all your efforts to improve. Keep up the good work. Here are the corrections for your sentences. - T. Jasper


As I told you, I working for pharmaceutical company where is most place to infection from the patient . 

>> As I told you, I work for a pharmaceutical company where there is a higher chance to be infected by the patients.
 So I stop to go hospital and community health center. and more like to wash and clean. 

>> I usually go to the hospital and community health center for checkup. I also make sure to wash and be clean all the time.


 In additional question for you about 11th edition for my article. is the same meaning for each sentence?
& #160;\"For exemple, I prefer to buy groceries outside than do online shopping.

>> \"For example, I prefer purchasing groceries online than doing them in person.
I means that I prefer Purchasing groceries them in person than online.


>> For this, I apologize for misreading the sentence. I thought you were referring to online grocery. I\'ll make sure this won\'t happen again.

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