What was the greatest regret you had while or even after working in a certain company?
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One of the things I regret is that in my first job, and I have rejected a position offer from a newly merged company. At that time, our company acquired another company because the company wanted to expand their business, and my boss, who had a good impression of me, offered me a good position in the newly merged company. I rejected the offer because I wanted to gain deeper experience in my first job, but when I look back over time I think it was a great opportunity to broaden my career with growing business.
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Hello [이름], We sometime encounter and regret things thatgives us life lessons that we need to become wiser and stronger.
~Aki:)
One of the things I regret is that in my first job, and I have rejected a position offer from a newly merged company.
>>>One of the things I regretted is that in my first job, and I have rejected a position offered by a newly merged company.
>>> One of the things I regretted happened in my first job when I rejected a position offered by a newly merged company.
At that time, our company acquired another company because the company wanted to expand their business, and my boss, who had a good impression of me, offered me a good position in the newly merged company.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>> During that time, our company merged with another company to expand their businesses and my boss who had a great impression on me offered me a good position.
I rejected the offer because I wanted to gain deeper experience in my first job, but when I look back over time I think it was a great opportunity to broaden my career with growing business.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>> I declined the offer because I still wanted to have deeper experience in my first job, but going back over time I think it would be a great moment to widen my profession with the growing business.
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