What was the happiest time in your entire life?
학생이 쓴 원문
It was when the first child was born.
My son give me great strong when my most difficult time.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir [이름]! Your answer is so inspiring.
Maybe I will also feel the same when I have my first child in the future.
Catch you later! ^^
~~May~~
It was when the first child was born.
>> The happiest time in my entire life is when my first child was born.
My son give me great strong when my most difficult time.
>> My son makes me strong during my most difficult time.
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