What was the happiest time in your entire life?
학생이 쓴 원문
The happiest time in my life is now. There were lots of happy times in past too. However the remember of past times are faded out, so I can\'t confirm to say which was the happiest time. Now I\'m happy enough. I have family who always support me and hobbies which always give me relaxation. And I\'m satisfied my job. Work is usually late and hard, but It\'s Ok because I like my job.
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Hello Saki-San! :)
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
The happiest time in my life is now. There were lots of happy times in past too.
>> The happiest time in my life is right now. There were lots of happy times in the past too.
However the remember of past times are faded out, so I can\'t confirm to say which was the happiest time.
>> However, the memories from the past are fading away, so, I can no longer recall which one was the happiest.
Now I\'m happy enough. I have family who always support me and hobbies which always give me relaxation.
>> Now, I am happily contented. I have my family who always support me and I have my hobbies which set as my relaxation.
And I\'m satisfied my job.
>> And I\'m satisfied with my job.
Work is usually late and hard, but It\'s Ok because I like my job.
>> I usually work late and it is hard, but it\'s totally fine because I like my job.
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