What was the hardest part of the past week for you?
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The hardest part of the past week for me was waiting to have my computer fixed. Actually a week ago, it was time to play a game and I pressed a power button but my computer didn’t work so my dad has brought it to fix at a repair shop. He said that it has to be changed a graphic card and a mother board so it will take for days. In fact I had to even wait for 7days until it comes back home. That is why I couldn’t play games I want to for a week and it was absolutely the hardest time for me.
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Happy Thursday!
T. DON
The hardest part of the past week for me was waiting to have my computer
fixed. Actually a week ago, it was time to play a game and I pressed a
power button but my computer didn’t work so my dad has brought it to fix
at a repair shop. He said that it has to be changed a graphic card and a
mother board so it will take for days. In fact I had to even wait for
7days until it comes back home. That is why I couldn’t play games I want
to for a week and it was absolutely the hardest time for me.
>> The hardest part of the past week for me was waiting to have my computer
fixed. Actually a week ago, I was planning to play a game and I pressed the
power button of my computer but it didn’t work so my dad brought it at a repair shop to be fixed. The technician said that he needs to change the graphic card and the
mother board so it will take a few days to be repaired. In fact, I had to wait for
7days until it was completely fixed. That is why I couldn’t play games for a week and it was absolutely the hardest time for me.
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