What was the highlight of your weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
First, my father and I consulted with an interior design company to remodel our new home.
It has been a very exciting experience, I have never experienced before and I expect to remodeling our new home.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing the highlight of your weekend.
I hope everything goes smoothly. I\'m sure the remodel will turn out amazing.
~Kelly^^
First, my father and I consulted with an interior design company to remodel our new home.
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>>My father and I initially consulted with an interior design company to plan the remodel of our new home.
It has been a very exciting experience, I have never experienced before and I expect to remodeling our new home.
>> It has been a very exciting experience that I have never had before, and I am looking forward to remodeling our new home.
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