What was the last great news you\'ve heard on TV or the internet? Write a little about it.
학생이 쓴 원문
I heard a little surprising news yesterday.
Korea don\'t have any natural resources like a gas. however Korea goverments announced they found the gas.
Even we need more investigate, anyway it\'s a good news for Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Wow! This is surprising news. I\'d love to hear about this more in our class. I hope you can give me more detail about this news.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I heard a little surprising news yesterday.
>>I heard some surprising news yesterday.
Korea don\'t have any natural resources like a gas. however Korea goverments announced they found the gas.
Korea don\'t have any natural resources like a gas. however Korea goverments announced they found the gas.
>>Korea doesn\'t have any natural resources like gas; however, the Korean government announced they found gas.
Even we need more investigate, anyway it\'s a good news for Korea.
Even we need more investigate, anyway it\'s a good news for Korea.
>>Although more investigation is needed, it\'s good news for Korea.
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