What was the last movie you saw at the cinema

2024-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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I saw a movie called \'escape\' last month with my husband. This movie is north Korean escape form north Korea. The north Korean was a soldier, he prepared to escape from north Korea, but his plan got out his boss. The boss ran after in a row him. But he didn\'t give up, finally he overcome a pain he could escape.

강사 첨삭

Hi Eva!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the movie \"Escape\"  that you watched with your husband last month. It sounds like a great story, following the journey of a North Korean soldier who attempts to escape. Despite the difficulties, his perseverance and determination to escape really stand out in your description. You did a good job explaining the plot of the movie! See you in our next class.

~Teacher Cathy

 

I saw a movie called \'escape\' last month with my husband.

>>I saw a movie called \'Escape\' last month with my husband.

This movie is north Korean escape form north Korea.

>>This movie is about escaping from North Korea.

The north Korean was a soldier, he prepared to escape from north Korea, but his plan got out his boss.

>>The North Korean was a soldier, he prepared to escape from North Korea but his plan got to his boss.

The boss ran after in a row him.

>>The boss kept running after him persistently.

But he didn\'t give up, finally he overcome a pain he could escape.

>>But he didn\'t give up, so in the end, he overcame the pain he thought he couldn\'t escape.

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