What was the last movie you saw at the cinema
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Hi Eva!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the movie \"Escape\" that you watched with your husband last month. It sounds like a great story, following the journey of a North Korean soldier who attempts to escape. Despite the difficulties, his perseverance and determination to escape really stand out in your description. You did a good job explaining the plot of the movie! See you in our next class.
~Teacher Cathy
I saw a movie called \'escape\' last month with my husband.
>>I saw a movie called \'Escape\' last month with my husband.
This movie is north Korean escape form north Korea.
>>This movie is about escaping from North Korea.
The north Korean was a soldier, he prepared to escape from north Korea, but his plan got out his boss.
>>The North Korean was a soldier, he prepared to escape from North Korea but his plan got to his boss.
The boss ran after in a row him.
>>The boss kept running after him persistently.
But he didn\'t give up, finally he overcome a pain he could escape.
>>But he didn\'t give up, so in the end, he overcame the pain he thought he couldn\'t escape.
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