What was the last movie you watched at the cinema? What is the movie about? Who\'s the main actor or
학생이 쓴 원문
The last movie I watched at the cinema is \"Wonka\".
Wonka is a movie about chocolate.
Timothee [이름]lamet is the main actor of the movie.
I like Timothee [이름]lamet in the movie.
I think the movie\'s main scene is Wonka saved peoples in danger and put out bad bosses.
강사 첨삭
Good Tuesday evening, Jimmy!
I\'m sending you back your corrected homework. As always, please go over the corrections and alternative expressions, such as \"chocolatier\". Good night and see you tomorrow!
Cheers,
Jean~~
What was the last movie you watched at the cinema? What is the movie about? Who\'s the main actor or actress?
The last movie I watched at the cinema is \"Wonka\".
>> The last movie I watched at the cinema was \"Wonka\".
Wonka is a movie about chocolate.
>> Wonka is a movie about a chocolatier.
Timothee [이름]lamet is the main actor of the movie.
>> Timothee [이름]lamet is the main actor in the movie.
I like Timothee [이름]lamet in the movie.
>> OR: I became a fan of Timothee [이름]lamet after watching this movie.
I think the movie\'s main scene is Wonka saved peoples in danger and put out bad bosses.
>> I think the movie\'s climax is when Wonka saves people in danger and puts out bad bosses.
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