What was the last picture you take on your phone? Describe it with all the adjectives that you know.
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Before the COVID-19 outbreak was spread over the world, I used to travel a lot.
I ususally went to the U.S almost every month for business trip.
Whenever I traveled, I tried to capture the moments that attract my attentions thru a camera.
They can be any moments while I was passing by, which can be
Skyscrapers in downtown which show me images of super-tall, high tech and at the same time, inherited with long history,
Graffiti on the walls that has artistic and very creative artworks,
Sunsets dying the sky reddish and so on.
Currently, I don\'t travel. I stay at home.
The latest picture that I took was the zoomed photo of flowers that were soaked with waterdrops after rain.
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Before the COVID-19 outbreak was spread over the world, I used to travel a lot.
>> Before the worldwide COVID-19 outbreak, I used to travel a lot.
I ususally went to the U.S almost every month for business trip.
I ususally went to the U.S almost every month for business trip.
>> I used to go to the U.S almost every month for business trips.
Whenever I traveled, I tried to capture the moments that attract my attentions thru a camera.
Whenever I traveled, I tried to capture the moments that attract my attentions thru a camera.
>> Whenever I traveled, I tried to capture the moments that attract my attention thru a camera.
They can be any moments while I was passing by, which can be Skyscrapers in downtown which show me images of super-tall, high tech and at the same time, inherited with long history,
They can be any moments while I was passing by, which can be Skyscrapers in downtown which show me images of super-tall, high tech and at the same time, inherited with long history,
>> They could be any moment while I was passing by, which includes skyscrapers downtown which showed me images of great height, high technology and at the same time ,long history.
Graffiti on the walls that has artistic and very creative artworks,
Graffiti on the walls that has artistic and very creative artworks,
>> I also took pictures of graffiti on walls which showed artistic and very creative artwork.
Sunsets dying the sky reddish and so on.
Sunsets dying the sky reddish and so on.
>> I also used to look at sunsets dying the sky reddish and others.
Currently, I don\'t travel.
Currently, I don\'t travel.
>> Correct
I stay at home.
>> Correct
The latest picture that I took was the zoomed photo of flowers that were soaked with waterdrops after rain.
The latest picture that I took was the zoomed photo of flowers that were soaked with waterdrops after rain.
>> The latest picture that I took was the zoomed in photo of flowers that were soaked with water drops after rain.
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