What was the last piece of good news you heard?
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Hello Rachel!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
It was Kim yu-na\'s marriage.
>> It was Kim Yu-na\'s marriage.
She was the best figure skater in Korea, who got to win many times in Olympics.
>> CORRECT!
So not an exaggeration, all of Koreans know her and also call her yu-na queen.
>> So not to exaggerate but all Koreans know her and also call her Yu-na Queen.
When we heard about the news, people said Isn\'t it a national marriage? as a joke.
>> When we heard about the news, people said, \"Isn\'t it a national marriage?\", as a joke.
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