What was the last thing you did that made you feel so much better?
학생이 쓴 원문
Reading a book named \'커튼콜은 사양할게요\' was the last thing i did that made my feel so much better. Because reading a book is been a long time and makes me feel peaceful. There is a season when I fall in love with books. I think I fall into reading books when I\'m having a hard time. These time, I am fascinated by Korean novels like hea[이름]g story and beautiful sentences. When I had trouble with human relationships, I fell into a self-development book to find the solution. But this time My head is complicated and tired so, I need some rest. And that\'s why I read Korean novels.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, [이름]! It’s great to hear that reading brings you peace and comfort, especially when you’re fee[이름]g overwhelmed. It sounds like Korean novels are really resonating with you right now.
~T. Jenna
Reading a book named \'커튼콜은 사양할게요\' was the last thing i did that made my feel so much better.
>>Reading a book named \'커튼콜은 사양할게요\' was the last thing I did that made me feel so much better.
OR
>> Engaging with the book titled \'커튼콜은 사양할게요\' was the most recent activity that significantly enhanced my well-being.
>> Engaging with the book titled \'커튼콜은 사양할게요\' was the most recent activity that significantly enhanced my well-being.
Because reading a book is been a long time and makes me feel peaceful.
>>Since it has been a long time since I read a book, it has made me feel peaceful.
OR
>>Since it’s been a while since I picked up a book, it has really put my mind at ease.
There is a season when I fall in love with books.
Correct,or
>>There’s a time when I’m head over heels for books.
I think I fall into reading books when I\'m having a hard time.
Correct,or
>>I find myself turning to books when I\'m having a hard time.
These time, I am fascinated by Korean novels like hea[이름]g story and beautiful sentences.
>>This time, I am fascinated by Korean novels, like / such as hea[이름]g stories and beautiful sentences.
When I had trouble with human relationships, I fell into a self-development book to find the solution.
Correct,or
>>When I faced difficulties with human relationships, I turned to a self-development book to find a solution.
But this time My head is complicated and tired so, I need some rest. And that\'s why I read Korean novels.
>>But this time, my mind is complicated and tired, so I need some rest. That’s why I’m reading Korean novels.
OR
>>However, at this moment, my mind is overwhelmed and fatigued, necessitating some respite. Consequently, I have turned to reading Korean novels
>>However, at this moment, my mind is overwhelmed and fatigued, necessitating some respite. Consequently, I have turned to reading Korean novels
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