What was the last thing you did that made you feel so much better?

There was a thing that made me feel better, recently. Just the day before yesterday, I went to my friend house in country side, which is about 60 km away from Seoul, with my close friends and their wives. We met together at his house from time to time. We stayed there all day long and had very much fun time. There were a small mountain and many kinds of beautiful flowers in the back yard of his house. We walked a mountain path together for a while and picked several wild greens. And also, we had a babeque for lunch. Occasionary, he propsed us to live at his area together in the near future. So, our friend are deeply considering his proposal whether it will be realized or not. But we try to think positively about his idea, Anyway it was very happy day for me and I felt so much better through our meeting.

Hi Dr. [이름]!

Thank you so much again!

I appreciate it a lot!

Have a good afternoon and talk to you tomorrow!

Teacher ELLY.

ESSAY QUESTION:

What was the last thing you did that made you feel so much better?

There was a thing that made me feel better, recently.

>>There was  something that made me feel better, recently.

or>>Recently, there was something that made me feel better.

Just the day before yesterday, I went to my friend house in country side, which is about 60 km away from Seoul.

>>Just the day before yesterday, I went to my friend’s house in the countryside, which is about 60 km. away from Seoul.

with my close friends and their wives.

>>I was accompanied with my close friends and their wives.

We met together at his house from time to time.

CORRECT!

>>We all have a get-together at his house at certain times.

We stayed there all day long and had very much fun time.

>>We stayed there all day long and had some fun time.

There were a small mountain and many kinds of beautiful flowers in the back yard of his house.

>>There is a small mountain and many kinds of beautiful flowers in his backyard.

We walked a mountain path together for a while and picked several wild greens.

>>We walked on a mountain path together for a while and picked several wild greens.

And also, we had a babeque for lunch.

>>And also, we had some barbecue for lunch.

Occasionary, he propsed us to live at his area together in the near future.

>>Occasionally, he suggested for us to all live around his area in the near future.

So, our friend are deeply considering his proposal whether it will be realized or not.

>>So, our friends are deeply considering his proposal, whether it will become a reality or not.

But we try to think positively about his idea,

>>So, we are trying to think positively about his idea.

Anyway it was very happy day for me and I felt so much better through our meeting. 

>>Anyway, it was a very happy day for me and I felt so much better through our meeting.