What was the longest flight you have ever taken?

2021-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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It was in my trip to Italy. I took 11hours of flight to get to Abudabi to stopover. It\'s very exhausting experience, but exciting too, as i have a big expectation intrip to Italy.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


It was in my trip to Italy. 

>> It was my trip to Italy. 

I took 11hours of flight to get to Abudabi to stopover. 

>> The flight took 11 hours to get to Abu Dhabi for a stopover.

It\'s very exhausting experience, but exciting too, as i have a big expectation intrip to Italy.

>> It was a very exhausting experience but exciting at the same time as I had a big expectation in my trip to Italy.

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