What was the lowest part of my life so far
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I think I don’t have the lowest part of my life that much. Dare I say it, when I was in high school first grade I almost quit doing exercise. I have done once a week. And I was getting fat as much as I can’t wear my pants. So I started go to the fitness center. However, since I had to do study, I was stressed and I ate continue, my weight didn’t lose. Although it is very little things I was stressed but not now.
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I think that this is a good news. :) Enjoy your life my dear.
I think I don’t have the lowest part of my life that much.
>> I think I haven\'t had any lowest part of my life.
Dare I say it, when I was in high school first grade I almost quit doing exercise.
>> Dare I say it, when I was in high school first grade, I almost quit doing exercise.
I have done once a week. And I was getting fat as much as I can’t wear my pants.
>> I did it once a week. And I was getting fat fast and I can’t wear my pants.
So I started go to the fitness center.
>> Correct.
However, since I had to do study, I was stressed and I ate continue, my weight didn’t lose.
>> However, since I had to do study, I was stressed and I ate continuously so my weight didn’t lose.
Although it is very little things I was stressed but not now.
>> Although there are very little things I get stressed easily, but I don\'t get it now.
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