What was the most dangerous thing that you have done?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a kid, I loved to climb a mountain.
But I might fall on the cliff because I was playing with my cousins.
But hopefully, I was okay, and I didn\'t fall that much on the cliff.
Since then, I was very scared of height.
Now I\'m not afraid of height that much but I always careful on the high place.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I am also very scared of heights. Your experience was a scary one. Be careful next time. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
But I might fall on the cliff because I was playing with my cousins.
But I might fall on the cliff because I was playing with my cousins.
>>But I almost fell off the cliff because I was playing with my cousins.
But hopefully, I was okay, and I didn\'t fall that much on the cliff.
But hopefully, I was okay, and I didn\'t fall that much on the cliff.
>>But fortunately, I was okay, and I didn\'t fall that much off the cliff.
Since then, I was very scared of height.
Since then, I was very scared of height.
>>Since then, I have been scared of heights.
Now I\'m not afraid of height that much but I always careful on the high place.
Now I\'m not afraid of height that much but I always careful on the high place.
>>Now I\'m not afraid of heights that much but I am always careful when I\'m on high places.
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