What was the most dangerous thing that you have done?

2023-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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The most dangerous thing that I\'ve done before is driving I guess. I still cannot drive well, I\'m a beginner. But a few months ago, when I was traveling with my X-bf, I wanted to drive and he said he can help me sitting next to me. So I sitted on the driver\'s seat and I asked him about the position of an accelerator and a brake. He was shocked and forced me not to drive, but I did. Fortunately, any accident wasn\'t happened, but I think it was the most dangerous thing.

강사 첨삭

Hello Gem!
Oh my god haha. Please be careful when you drive in the future. I\'m a very nervous driver too so my parents told me to never drive haha. Anyway, great job with today\'s composition! Keep it up! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

The most dangerous thing that I\'ve done before is driving I guess.
>>CORRECT!
I still cannot drive well, I\'m a beginner. 
>>CORRECT!
But a few months ago, when I was traveling with my X-bf, I wanted to drive and he said he can help me sitting next to me. 
>>But a few months ago, when I was traveling with my ex-boyfriend, I wanted to drive and he said he can help me by sitting next to me. 
So I sitted on the driver\'s seat and I asked him about the position of an accelerator and a brake.
>>So I sat on the driver\'s seat and I asked him about the position of an accelerator and a brake.
He was shocked and forced me not to drive, but I did. 
>>CORRECT!
Fortunately, any accident wasn\'t happened, but I think it was the most dangerous thing.
>>Fortunately, an accident didn\'t happen, but I think it was the most dangerous thing.

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