What was the most difficult time of your life? Answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
When my brother was died, I spent a tough time to deal with it, and it will be bothered me forever. However, i hope time heals old wounds.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Judy!
I am sorry I asked this question. It was our topic from the book. I am aware of this fact. Looking back a few months ago, your sorrow was darker than the night. But today, it seems lighter seeing you do steps to make your situation better. Losing your brother was a very painful part of your lives. Living your life today is a gift. It may take a long while to be fine but please try to be happy in your own little ways.
I am always here to make you smile. ^^
Take care always.
-T. Donna =)
>> When my brother died, I spent a tough time dealing with it and it will bother me forever. However, I hope time heals all wounds.
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