What was the most frightening experience you\'ve had?
학생이 쓴 원문
Korean have to go army.
And specially few people can choose that serve in army or air force or navy or policeman.
So i served on policeman for Korean citizen\'s duty.
Sometime policeman worked at demonstration place.
And some demonstration have to fight with people.
When i went to demonstration for protecting a government office.
Demonstrators look like Korean gangster.
I have to fight with them.
It\'s really frightening.
And also giant insects make me scary.
Look at that attachment.
I got a grasshopper in Australia.
I hate that.
Have a good night. thanks for your teaching!!
강사 첨삭
Happy hump day Simon! Thank you for showing this picture. It was so clear that I could even see how beautiful that creature is but I\'m scared of insects. :) See you tomorrow!
I have to fight with them.
~Teacher Sheila
Korean have to go army.
>>Korean has to go to the army
OR>>A Korean has to go to do military service.
And specially few people can choose that serve in army or air force or navy or policeman.
And specially few people can choose that serve in army or air force or navy or policeman.
>>And a few people can choose where they want to be placed, whether in the army, air force, navy or be a police man.
So i served on policeman for Korean citizen\'s duty.
So i served on policeman for Korean citizen\'s duty.
>>So, I served as a police man as my citizen\'s duty.
OR>>So, I served as a police officer as part of my citizen\'s duty.
Sometime policeman worked at demonstration place.
Sometime policeman worked at demonstration place.
>>Sometimes, policeman has to work in demonstration places.
And some demonstration have to fight with people.
And some demonstration have to fight with people.
>>And sometimes, we had to fight with people during the demonstration.
When i went to demonstration for protecting a government office.
When i went to demonstration for protecting a government office.
>>One time, I went to a demonstration to protect a government office.
Demonstrators look like Korean gangster.
>>Demonstrators looked like Korean gangster.
OR>>The demonstrators looked like Korean gangsters.
I have to fight with them.
>>I had to fight them.
It\'s really frightening.
It\'s really frightening.
>>It was really frightening.
OR>>It was really scary.
And also giant insects make me scary.
And also giant insects make me scary.
>>Also, a giant insect made me scared.
OR>>Also, I\'m scared of a giant insect.
Look at that attachment.
Look at that attachment.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Look at the picture.
I got a grasshopper in Australia. I hate that.
I got a grasshopper in Australia. I hate that.
>>I encountered a grasshopper in Australia and I hated it.
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