What was the most frightening experience you\\\'ve had?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear teacher Sheila
Hello there teacher Sheila! Happy Thursday! I had a great time learning with you today,too.
You are a good teacher. I read teacher\'s profile. I get to know Teacher\'s hobby is listening to music.
I like listening to music,too. So I\'ll recommend good pop song for you every day. Are you okay?
I\'d like to recommend \'l-o-v-e\'. Original singer is Nat King Cole. He\'s daughter Natalie Cole sing this song,too.
Do you know this song? The song lyrics are very romantic. See you tomorrow!
Homework
What was the most frightening experience you\'ve had?
I had very frightening experience. It\'s pass at the scene of the traffic accident. I want to forget.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tony! Yes I do love listening to music especially pop songs. Thank you for recommending a good song. I will listen to it tonight because I don\'t know this song. :)
Until the next one! :)
See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
I get to know Teacher\'s hobby is listening to music.
>>I got to know teacher\'s hobby is listening to music.
I like listening to music,too.
>>CORRECT
So I\'ll recommend good pop song for you every day. Are you okay?
>>So, I\'ll recommend a good pop song for you every day. Is that okay?
I\'d like to recommend \'l-o-v-e\'.
>>CORRECT
Original singer is Nat King Cole.
>>The original singer is Nat King Cole.
He\'s daughter Natalie Cole sing this song,too.
>>His daughter Natalie Cole sang this song too.
Do you know this song?
>>CORRECT
The song lyrics are very romantic.
>>The song\'s lyrics are very romantic.
I had very frightening experience.
I had very frightening experience.
>>I had a very frightening experience.
It\'s pass at the scene of the traffic accident. I want to forget.
>>It was about a traffic accident I want to forget.
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