What was the most important decision that you made in your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
When I studied in University, I tried to learn computer programming at night. but it was very difficult choice to study it at nighttime. because I studied the Korean Literature at daytime. but after finishing it, I could go to the foreigner company.
if I studied the Korean Literature only, I should worked as a teacher or insureance company.
Now, I work for medical company. this job is very safety work and the Salary is higher than any other jobs.
Even though I am not a major in this business, I got a lot of careers for 20 years, so I can maintain my job without difficulty.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
if I studied the Korean Literature only, I should worked as a teacher or insureance company.
Now, I work for medical company. this job is very safety work and the Salary is higher than any other jobs.
Even though I am not a major in this business, I got a lot of careers for 20 years, so I can maintain my job without difficulty.
How did your day go? See you in bit in our class ^^
Dear [Name],
When I studied in University, I tried to learn computer programming at night. but it was very difficult choice to study it at nighttime. because I studied the Korean Literature at daytime. but after finishing it, I could go to the foreigner company.
When I studied in University, I tried to learn computer programming at night. but it was very difficult choice to study it at nighttime. because I studied the Korean Literature at daytime. but after finishing it, I could go to the foreigner company.
>> When I studied in University, I tried to learn computer programming at night but it was a very difficult choice to study it at night time because I studied the Korean Literature at daytime but after finishing it, I could go to work for the foreigner company.
if I studied the Korean Literature only, I should worked as a teacher or insureance company.
>> if I studied the Korean Literature only, my work would have been a teacher or in an insurance company.
Now, I work for medical company. this job is very safety work and the Salary is higher than any other jobs.
>> Now, I work for a medical company. This job is very safe and the salary is higher than any other jobs.
Even though I am not a major in this business, I got a lot of careers for 20 years, so I can maintain my job without difficulty.
>> Even though my major is not about business, my career went for more than 20 years now and I can say my job is stable.
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