What was the most important lesson you have learned in life?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have learned a lot of things for my whole life.
But, I think the most important value is steadyness.
It makes possible many things that we want.
If I want something like a pass the exam, I should try steadily.
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing your experience about an important lesson you learned. Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I have learned a lot of things for my whole life. But, I think the most important value is steadyness.
>> I have learned many things throughout my life, but I believe that the most crucial value is steadiness.
It makes possible many things that we want.
>> It enables us to achieve many of our desires.
If I want something like a pass the exam, I should try steadily.
>> For instance, if I aim to pass an exam, I must maintain a steady effort.
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