What was the most interesting place you have ever visited?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t have much experience oversea travel.
Last year, My family and i went to Hong Kong for winter vacation.
We visited many cities. Among them, Makao was so amazing.
There are a lot of giant hotel and many luxury store.
At night, We saw wonderful night view of Makao. Maybe I can\'t forget that.
And there is a casino on the 1floor of the hotel. The casino was opened 24hours.
I didn\'t visit there because i don\'t like gamble.
Go to Makao is so expensive, but watching a huge view of many building is so nice experience.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
It sounds like you had a blast. ^^ Please tell me more about your travels next time. :)
~ Teacher Trixia
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I don\'t have much experience oversea travel.
- I don\'t have much experience with overseas travel.
Last year, My family and i went to Hong Kong for winter vacation.
- Last year, my family and I went to Hong Kong for winter vacation.
We visited many cities.
- We visited many cities.
Among them, Makao was so amazing.
- Among them, Macao was so amazing.
There are a lot of giant hotel and many luxury store.
- There are a lot of giant hotels and many luxury stores.
At night, We saw wonderful night view of Makao.
- At night, we saw a wonderful night view of Macao.
Maybe I can\'t forget that.
- Maybe I can\'t forget that.
And there is a casino on the 1floor of the hotel.
- And there is a casino on the first floor of the hotel.
The casino was opened 24hours.
- The casino was open 24 hours a day.
I didn\'t visit there because i don\'t like gamble.
- I didn\'t visit there because I don\'t like to gamble.
Go to Makao is so expensive, but watching a huge view of many building is so nice experience.
- Going to Makao is so expensive, but watching a huge view of many buildings is such a nice experience.
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