What was the most interesting thing that you did during the vacation?
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Traveling is really interesting especially with the people we love. Enjoy traveling and exploring the world more. ^^
My last vacation is travel in Donghae with my boy friend.
>>My last vacation was in Donghae with my boyfriend.
Donghae si is beside the Donghae sea, so I really enjoyed the sea.
>>Donghae is beside the sea, so I really enjoyed the view.
We drove beside the beach, and visited many beaches.
>>We drove beside the seashore and visited many beaches.
The best exciting thing was surfing.
>>The most exciting thing was surfing.
It is my first time, but the coach said I was skillful.
>>It was my first time surfing, but the coach said I was skillful.
I found my talent of surfing.
>>I certainly found my talent.
I could stand on surfing board easily, and could go far away.
>>I could easily stand on the surfing board and go far away.
Demerits was weather.
>>The only disadvantage was the weather.
The wind is so weak, so waves is so small.
>>The wind was so weak, so the waves so not so good.
Small waves were not suitable for surfing.
>>Correct.
And the weather was cool, so when I\'m in water for a long time, I was cold.
>>Correct.
>>OR: I felt cold in the water for a long time.
However, my boyfriend and I played in the water for a long time until my lips changed blue color.
>>However, my boyfriend and I played in the water for a long time until my lips changed to blue color.
I used to love to dabble in water, but I can\'t do it for 1 year because of pendemic, so It is very exciting time for me.
>>I used to love dabbling in the water, but I could not do it for a year because of the pandemic. So it was an exciting time for me.
I wish to dabble in water freely without virus in future.
>>I wish to dabble in the water freely without any worries in the future.
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