What was the most memorable concert you\'ve been to so far? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'ve only been to a concert once.
When I was an elementary school student, it was not a specific singer concert, but a concert with several singers and several groups.
It was the first concert I saw, and I enjoyed watching it with my mother, so it was memorable. Also, the weather seemed to be quite cold, so it was even more memorable.
강사 첨삭
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I\'ve only been to a concert once.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I’ve attended a concert only once.
When I was an elementary school student, it was not a specific singer concert but a concert with several singers and several groups.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: When I was in elementary school, it wasn’t a concert for a specific singer, but a concert that featured several singers and groups.
It was the first concert I saw, and I enjoyed watching it with my mother, so it was memorable.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: It was the first concert I attended, and I really enjoyed watching it with my mother, which made it memorable.
Also, the weather seemed to be quite cold, so it was even more memorable.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: The weather was quite cold, which made the experience even more memorable.
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