What was the most memorable school activity you experienced when you were a student?

2022-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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What was the most memorable school activity you experienced when you were a student? I recalled the outdoor class, when I was 2 grade in High School. It was Korean class. Teacher told us \"Let\'s take a walk.\" There was a small hill around my school. So we followed her. When we reached some flat ground, she handed out some pens and notes to us. And she suggested some topic, unfortunately I couldn\'t remember the topic, talking \"Write about it freely for 30 minutes.\" Most students gave a deep sigh but I was excited because I love that mood. The fresh wind blew and the bird sang happily and the evergreen looked nice. It was the best moment that I can write something well. So it is the most memorable school activity for me. P.S I attached the photo that I was writing at outdoor class. I found it on my album!!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Arissa,

I appreciate you for sharing your wonderful memory. You really look so happy and excited in the photo. This shows that you really love that outdoor activity. It was a wonderful moment that you could treasure and a moment that could also be an inspiration. ^^

~ Teacher Gina

I recalled the outdoor class, when I was 2 grade in High School. It was Korean class. Teacher told us \"Let\'s take a walk.\" There was a small hill around my school. So we followed her. When we reached some flat ground, she handed out some pens and notes to us. And she suggested some topic, unfortunately I couldn\'t remember the topic, talking \"Write about it freely for 30 minutes.\" Most students gave a deep sigh but I was excited because I love that mood. The fresh wind blew and the bird sang happily and the evergreen looked nice. It was the best moment that I can write something well. So it is the most memorable school activity for me.

P.S I attached the photo that I was writing at outdoor class. I found it on my album!!!!

>> I recalled the outdoor class when I was in 2nd grade in High School. It was a Korean class. The teacher told us, \"Let\'s take a walk.\" There was a small hill around my school. So we followed her. When we reached some flat ground, she handed out some pens and notes to us. And she suggested some topics. Unfortunately, I couldn\'t remember the topic. I just remembered what was said, \"Write about it freely for 30 minutes.\" Most students gave a deep sigh, but I was excited because I loved that mood. The fresh wind blew, the bird sang happily, and the evergreen looked nice. It was the best moment that I could write something well. So it is the most memorable school activity for me.

P.S I attached the photo when I was writing at the outdoor class. I found it on my album!!!!

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