What was the most memorable weekend you had with your friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
I went ‘IU’ concert with my friend last 2 weekends.
My favorite Korean singer is ‘IU’.
Her concert plays in [이름]ul World Cup Stadium during the weekend.
I went to both Saturday and Sunday.
We taken the pictures together and ate a tteokbokki after concert.
IU concert is very excited experience for me.
I always remember that day!
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing your memorable concert experience, Da[이름]. I envy you because I like IU as a singer, too.-Faith-
I went ‘IU’ concert with my friend last 2 weekends.>> I went to the \'IU\' concert with my friend two weekends ago.
My favorite Korean singer is ‘IU’.
My favorite Korean singer is ‘IU’.
>> CORRECT
OR The singer I admire the most is IU.
Her concert plays in [이름]ul World Cup Stadium during the weekend.
Her concert plays in [이름]ul World Cup Stadium during the weekend.
>> Her concert took place at the [이름]ul World Cup Stadium.
I went to both Saturday and Sunday.
I went to both Saturday and Sunday.
>> We went on both Saturday and Sunday.
We taken the pictures together and ate a tteokbokki after concert.
We taken the pictures together and ate a tteokbokki after concert.
>> We took pictures together and ate tteokbokki after the concert.
IU concert is very excited experience for me.
IU concert is very excited experience for me.
>> The IU concert was a very exciting experience for me.
I always remember that day!
I always remember that day!
>> I will always remember that day!
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