What was the most thrilling thing you\'ve ever done? Explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the most thrilling thing is strike in bowling because it is very happy.
And shoot the ball, getting the opposing team out in dodge ball is so cool.
Also I shoot goal in soccer, it is very fun.
강사 첨삭
Good evening again there, Jimmy!
Here\'s another revised composition for you. Do check out the few corrections given. Have a goodnight and see you this Friday!
Cheers,
Jean~~
What was the most thrilling thing you\'ve ever done? Explain.
I think the most thrilling thing is strike in bowling because it is very happy.
>> I think the most thrilling thing is getting a strike in bowling because it makes me happy.
And shoot the ball, getting the opposing team out in dodge ball is so cool.
>> And dodging or catching the ball of the opposing team in dodgeball is so cool.
Also I shoot goal in soccer, it is very fun.
>> Also, scoring a goal in soccer is very fun.
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