What was the most unforgettable childhood memory that you have? What happened? What lesson did that
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It happened when I was in high school during summer vacation. I traveled the southern place in South Korea with my family and uncle\'s family. While we were coming back home from there, my cou[이름] said that \"I want to go to the bathroom\". So we stopped by a rest station. Also, I went to the bathroom, but they left me at a rest station!! So I took a ride in a police car. And the cops gave me a ride to next station. :)
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Your sentence construction in today\'s homework is very good. I am impressed with how you wrote them, especially the fist and second sentences. Your progress is getting better! Keep it up Elic! :)
>> Correct.
I traveled the southern place in South Korea with my family and uncle\'s family.
>> Correct.
While we were coming back home from there, my cou[이름] said that \"I want to go to the bathroom\". So we stopped by a rest station.
>> While we were on our way back home, my cou[이름] suddenly said that he wants to go to the bathroom, so we stopped by the nearest rest station.
Also, I went to the bathroom, but they left me at a rest station!!
>> I also went to the bathroom, but I suddenly realized that they left me at the rest station.
So I took a ride in a police car. And the cops gave me a ride to next station. :)
>> The cops gave me a ride to the next station in their police car.
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