What was the single best thing that happened this past year?
학생이 쓴 원문
I studied hard to go the college this year.
Although I didn’t get the score of the exam to go the university, l think it’s meaningful to learn many things in preparing the exam.
Next year, I will study harder and live happier than now.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenna! Thank you for the time you gave to make your composition. I know you will have a wonderful new year. Enjoy the holidays with your family. I will see you next year! ~ T. Lyn
I studied hard to go the college this year.
>>I studied and must continue to study hard to go to college this year.
Although I didn’t get the score of the exam to go the university, l think it’s meaningful to learn many things in preparing the exam.
Although I didn’t get the score of the exam to go the university, l think it’s meaningful to learn many things in preparing the exam.
>>Even though, I don\'t get the test scores to go to college, I think it\'s meaningful to learn a lot while preparing for the exam.
Next year, I will study harder and live happier than now.
>>Next year, I will study harder than now and live a happier life.
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