What was the worst experience have you encountered with your customer?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Thank you for your lesson.
As you know, I am sales man, so I have many chance to meet my customer.
When I worked for Sanofi that it was French company, I visited a customer who request something to me.
Sometimes, he asked me lunch or dinner and a present as like he wants.
Beginning time, I gave all that he have wanted, but it didnt take much time I know that he didn\'t keep the promise with me.
He received many thing from sales men including me. but he didn\'t keep his promise with sales men.
He always promised using our medical instruments. but he delayed his promise continously.
For example, current situation is not good. let\'s see next month or he is very busy so it is impossible to do now and so on.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy midweek to you ^^ See you in our class today
Dear [Name],
Thank you for your lesson.
As you know, I am sales man, so I have many chance to meet my customer.
>> As you know, I am a sales man, so I have many chances to meet my customers.
When I worked for Sanofi that it was French company, I visited a customer who request something to me.
>> When I worked for Sanofi which is a French company, I visited a customer who requested something from me.
Sometimes, he asked me lunch or dinner and a present as like he wants.
>> Sometimes, he asked me to have lunch or dinner and a presentation that he asked for.
Beginning time, I gave all that he have wanted, but it didnt take much time I know that he didn\'t keep the promise with me.
>> At first, I gave all that he have wanted, but it didn\'t take long because I know that he will not keep his promise with me.
He received many thing from sales men including me. but he didn\'t keep his promise with sales men.
>> He received many things from sales men including me, but he didn\'t keep his promise with the sales men.
He always promised using our medical instruments. but he delayed his promise continously.
>> He always promised to use our medical instruments but he didn\'t keep his promise continuously.
For example, current situation is not good. let\'s see next month or he is very busy so it is impossible to do now and so on.
>> For example, he will utter that his current situation is not good so let\'s see next month or he is very busy so it is not impossible to do now and so on.
Thank you for your lesson.
As you know, I am sales man, so I have many chance to meet my customer.
>> As you know, I am a sales man, so I have many chances to meet my customers.
When I worked for Sanofi that it was French company, I visited a customer who request something to me.
>> When I worked for Sanofi which is a French company, I visited a customer who requested something from me.
Sometimes, he asked me lunch or dinner and a present as like he wants.
>> Sometimes, he asked me to have lunch or dinner and a presentation that he asked for.
Beginning time, I gave all that he have wanted, but it didnt take much time I know that he didn\'t keep the promise with me.
>> At first, I gave all that he have wanted, but it didn\'t take long because I know that he will not keep his promise with me.
He received many thing from sales men including me. but he didn\'t keep his promise with sales men.
>> He received many things from sales men including me, but he didn\'t keep his promise with the sales men.
He always promised using our medical instruments. but he delayed his promise continously.
>> He always promised to use our medical instruments but he didn\'t keep his promise continuously.
For example, current situation is not good. let\'s see next month or he is very busy so it is impossible to do now and so on.
>> For example, he will utter that his current situation is not good so let\'s see next month or he is very busy so it is not impossible to do now and so on.
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