What was you best service that you gave?
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Hi Trinity!
This is another impressive side to your personality.
I love getting to know you more through your writing.
You did a good job.
Keep expressing your ideas.
~~ Teacher Sharon
At my previous job a group of people who are in a wheelchair visited to theater to watch movie and they want to buy popcorns and sodas.
>> In my previous job, a group of people in wheelchairs visited the theater to watch a movie and they wanted to buy popcorn and soda.
but our counter is too high to see the menu and receive the food for them.
>> However, our counter was too high for them to see the menu and get their order.
so I go out to the counter with the menu and take their order one bye one.
>> I went out of the counter with the menu and took their orders one by one.
they are 5 members so i can remember what they want for each.
>> There were 5 people and I tried to remember what each person wanted.
and then after the foods come out I gave a popcorns and soda to each other.
>> After the food was ready, I gave their order individually.
they look so happy and someone give me a chocolate meaning of thanks.
>> They looked so happy and someone gave me chocolate to express her gratitude.
I am also happy to see they smiling face and after that I put a menu on the bottom for the handicapped person.
>> I was also happy to see their smiling faces and after that incident, I placed a menu at the bottom of the counter for the handicapped.
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