What was your best \"Chu Seok\" holiday? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My best Chu Seok was spent time with my relatives. When I met them I had a great time with them and I like to see them. But this Chu Seok is not. I wish COVID-19 will finish soon.
강사 첨삭
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Here are your corrections:
>> My best Chu Seok was when I spent my time with my relatives.
When I met them I had a great time with them and I like to see them.
>> When I met them, I had a great time and I liked it when I saw them.
But this Chu Seok is not.
>> But this Chu Seok was not that great because of the pandemic.
I wish COVID-19 will finish soon
>> I wish COVID-19 will end soon. (FINISH is used to end a task or stage while END is for stop or termination of something)
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