What was your best experience in celebrating Chuseok?
학생이 쓴 원문
I went travel to Yesan with my parents, brother and my grandmother. I went to waterpark and Bobu sangchon park. It was my best experience in celebrating Chuseok.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy!
Oh, This was your recent celebration of Chuseok. I haven\'t thought that this was your best experience among others. Wow!
~Teacher Erin
I went travel to Yesan with my parents, brother and my grandmother.
>>CORRECT
I went to waterpark and Bobu sangchon park.
>>I went to the water park and Bobu Sanchon park.
It was my best experience in celebrating Chuseok.
>>It was my best experience celebrating Chuseok.
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