What was your best friendship? Are you still friends with him or her? What life lessons did you lear
학생이 쓴 원문
You know? I didn\'t know it\'s important to keep the relationship with my friends when I was younger. Because we always met at school. As I\'m getting older, as we lose contact, we move away from each other and become each other. As looking that, I thought it\'s thankful to just stay around me.
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Hi Eric!
Thank you for your diligence in completing your homework. Your commitment to your studies is commendable.Your dedication and effort in our class are truly appreciated. Thank you for your commitment to improving your language skills.
[이름]cerely,
^^ T. Ara
You know? I didn\'t know it\'s important to keep the relationship with my friends when I was younger.
>> You know, I didn\'t realize how important it is to maintain relationships with my friends when I was younger (continue the sentence, don\'t put period anymore)
Because we always met at school.
>> because we always met at school.
As I\'m getting older, as we lose contact, we move away from each other and become each other.
>> As I\'ve gotten older, and as we\'ve lost contact and moved away from each other,
As looking that, I thought it\'s thankful to just stay around me.
>> I\'ve come to appreciate the value of just having them around me.
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