What was your best memory when you were a child?

2015-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Lsat time I heard that you live in Philippine not a Korea! I did misunderstand where you live. Understandably, I considered you live in korea. So I asked that question. hahaha:) Any way, My best childhood memory was living with my whole family. My family member were my parent, older sister, my boy twin and me. Though there were bad meomries and good memories, I love and miss in those days.

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Hello there [이름]! I\'ve thought about that too. I think you really thought that I was in Korea. I wish I was there. ^_^ I just found out that you have a twin brother. I suddenly want to see you. I am really fascinated!^_^ Well, see you later! ~T. Jessie~ Lsat time I heard that you live in Philippine not a Korea! >> Last time, I heard that you live in rhe Philippine not in Korea! I did misunderstand where you live. >> I misunderstood where you live. Understandably, I considered you live in korea. >> Correct! So I asked that question. hahaha:) >> Correct!Any way, My best childhood memory was living with my whole family. >> Anyway, my best childhood memory was living with my whole family.My family member were my parent, older sister, my boy twin and me. >> My family members are my parents, my older sister, my  twin brother and me. Though there were bad meomries and good memories, I love and miss in those days. >> Though there were bad and good memories, I love and miss those days.

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